Level to the water. By now im totally confused I am surrounded by a high wall and the water, the freezing water, im scared what am I doing here where am I who am I, the question are many, I look up and see the little opening in the top. I climb up the slippery wall waiting to find out where I am, but the light is to bright can’t see can’t feel anything, anymore, I lose my grip but a hand reach out and grabs me. I wake up.
I am who I am where?
These questions are very common these days, maybe not the, I am where because I hope the majority know where they are. The question I am who is very common today amongst young people. Life is the hardest thing to do right, because many times right can be wrong and the other way around, it’s a task we must do on our own, some people help us in the search of ourselves some can provide you guidance in life. No one can tell you when you reach goal or you even reach the goal, but in the end you decide when and how you will find the real you.
Made by Steffen.
There is nothing wrong with your imagination!
ReplyDeleteAnd a nice reflection upon an interesting subject: identity-creation.
Although some major and minor grammar mistakes.
But overall nice relection.
I really like your use of imagery -the wall and the slipperiness of it, making it difficult to climb. Very effective, and it fits the existential question you raise regarding identity.
ReplyDeleteA little more focus on grammar would have been good, though :-)