Thursday, December 15, 2011

The black snake

A long black snake was twisting its glistened body through the dry long grass. It moved quickly against a open spot, about 15 meter away. At the open spot, a big herd of deer was grassing in peaceful harmony, not aware of want soon was going to happen. The snake approached drastically the open spot, were the herd was standing. When the snake reached the open spot, it slowed down. At this point there was very silent in this beautiful environment, maybe to silent. Suddenly the silence broke, and the snake attacked the herd. It bet onto the leg of a small deer, which after a couple of minutes fighting for its life had to give up.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    Oh!

    I like the enviroment in this story. There is also a nice flow! The flow maintains the focus through the whole story. Good job!

    But hey hey.. What about the snake afterwards? I think we all want to know that ;-)

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  2. Rasmus WannDecember 16, 2011 at 9:43 AM

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  3. Rasmus WannDecember 16, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    short, but very very dramatic. i love it <3

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