When you are going to England there are so many different oppertunities about which cities and hotels you can visit/stay at. We are a danish travelling agency called Steff&Mad tours. We have planned vaccations for pairs and families for over 2 and a half month so we have a lot of experince. At the moment we are the cheapest travelling agency in scandinavia with prices like 100 euro for a lovely trip from Aalborg to Ryå. Perhaps you secondly want to travel to another country where they also have the freedom of expressions so that you can discuss policy with ignorant people. On the other hand you might enjoy a relaxing trip to Hawaii where you can lie under the sunshade and just admire the beautiful view of the ocean.
But Steff and Mad Tours expertice is planning trips and vacations to the beautiful city London in England. We have a lot of offers that you cant refuse. For an example you can stay at Hotel Hilton for 4 days with beakfast included in the price. Besides that Steff and Mad Tours will take you to London and show/tell you about the Dungeons, the tower Bridge, the London Eye and finally we will show you Big Ben. You get all of this for just 4000 euro!.(the price is for 1 person)
Never the less you can allways count on Steff and Mad Tours will be there for you and your family.
I like the humorous tone to your writing. And your description of London is interesting. If not for the (very)steep price, I would definitely book my next trip to London through your agency.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think you spent too much time/space before you got to the point (= London). It would also have been good to round off with a conclusive discourse marker.