On a long and lonesome highway, there we were. Backpacking, on our way through the dark of Jutland On our way to see Brian Adams. He was giving a concert in Gigantium, in Aalborg. On our way through Jutland, we were all of a sudden got, very hungry. Firstly our stomachs began to rattle, and then we heard a person scream! but it was just Anne who had seen a spider. Then we had to find a diner because, we were starving. So we found a diner called Tage's Pølsebod. However had the best sausages, and hotdogs Then a man wanted to give us a lift. And after some time of thinking, we said yes. Luckily he should to the Brian Adams concert too.
The car was big. And kind of creepy, I think it was a Chevrolet. To loosen up the atmosphere, he put some music on, it was Brian Adams, with the song summer of 69, but further on he told us about things he had done in his summer of 69. And we couldn't tell him what we had done because we weren't born. But he had some good stories to tell us, and it wasn’t boring and on the other hand, we were entertaint, anyways we got out to the Gigantium. And finally it was a great concert.
So to sum up, it was difficult to arrive to the concert, but it was a damn good concert.
So as wise men says: What’s worth the prize is always worth the fight.
Anne Juul & Casper Stoltze
A somewhat different piece of travel writing - are you aiming at recommending Jutland to your readers, or Bryan Adams? Your focus is more on how you got there, than on describing the holiday and the destination itself. Otherwise ok as to discourse markers - you apply all four categories. Some linguistic mistakes - perhaps you didn't have time to proof-read it?
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