Have you ever wanted to go to heaven on earth?
A trip to Paris, the world’s centre of love, could very well be what you have been searching for.
When we went there, firstly, we wanted to experience the rich cultural environment; therefore we went to both the Eiffel tower and Louvre. Secondly, we also went there to shop in the capital of fashion. The possibilities we had there were magnificent, for example we could drive for an hour, and get to an old vineyard where we could taste all the wine we wanted to, on the other hand we could also just stay in town and eat in the finest restaurant that I have ever seen. Alternately we could go to a theme park, perhaps Disneyland, that were within our reach. Children would love to go to Disneyland and meet Mickey, Minnie, Donald or Goofy. We also had the greatest time riding all the rides there, and whereas you often get tired of the other theme parks, you could stay in Disneyland forever.
Even the trip there was easy; we flew directly to Charles de Gaulle, where we rented a car to get the most freedom we could.
To sum up we would really recommend Paris to all of you, as we had the time of our lives there.
Writers: Ditte Kjær-Jensen & Jakob Koch.
Nice piece of writing. You really had an adventurous trip, and I wonder if not a few of the readers may be tempted to go there themselves :-) You came full circle as to discourse markers - good.
ReplyDeleteNot many linguistic mistakes,good work.