Thursday, January 19, 2012

Who knows?

It was a gloomy and windy night, the Leaf were flying. Three friends were together they were about to leave their homes in the little city of Wintherfeld, for a week in the woods. Camping and drinking like they have done a million times before. But this time it was different. It was a hot day in July. They all gathered at Tobias’s house, getting ready for the trip. The three friends Tobias, Casper and Steffen, was going to travel for several hours before they reached the camping spot, that they have visited so many times before. Three hours later they arrived, and the light were fading, the trees were making noises. The three friends didn’t notice it; they were excited, and quickly raised the tent and drinking some beer and vodka. Tobias quickly noticed that there were some good looking chicks, and before the two other friends have packed out, he was inviting them over to a party. Later the night the friends were ready to party, and soon the girls would arrive. Twenty minutes later Casper should, go through the Forrest down to the kiosk and buy some more refreshments. Casper was going down the road, then suddenly the lights faded, the wind increased, the heat disappeared his breath got louder. Casper then just ran as fast he could, a black shadow was following him, but luckily a car came and all were like, nothing happened. Meanwhile Steffen and Tobias were greeting the ladies, and firing up the charm. Tobias and one of the girls, Sofia, went for a walk in the moonlight, while Steffen and the two other chicks were chilling. In the camping kiosk Casper had bought some drinks, and was on his way back. When Casper came back, a horrifying scenario met him. Blood everywhere and there were dead silence. Casper ran to the tent, nobody. At the same time Tobias came running with fear in his eyes, he said that a weird hairy beast with red glowing eyes had taken Sofia. Casper and Tobias were frightened to death, didn’t know what to do, should they look for Steffen, or just drive away. They decided to take the car to search for Steffen, but when they sat in the car it wouldn’t start, but a black smoke surrounded the car, temperature were falling the water froze and the car shacked tires exploded, the car roof got ripped off.

Three years later, still nobody knows what happened, or why.

1 comment:

  1. Good story, guys. However, I would have liked a bit more supense from the beginning - you tend to describe a bit too much. Sometimes, leaving a bit for imagination is better. Nice ending of your story - almost Blair Witch like....

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