Charlie and
Brenda were on their way home from Charlie’s parent. It was a late night about
half past eleven. They were driving
through the wood, the only way home from the parents. Suddenly the car brakes
down and there was smoke on front of them. They looked at each other and
decided that Charlie should walk for help, while Brenda use there phone to call
for help.
The cars
headlights were lighting up the road, so Charlie was following the lights
tribes on the road. Brenda took the mobile phone and dialled the number to the
police. She listened but couldn’t hear anything. There was no signal. She was
afraid and looked scared around. She heard a weird noise and suddenly
everything was black.
Charlie
walked and walked, but he doesn’t feel that he came anywhere. He heard a
rustling noise and turned around. His adrenaline was pumping through his body.
He got a feeling that something was wrong and decided to head back to the car. When
he came back to the car he saw blood everywhere. A newborn baby lies dead on
the car. He was choked. He looked into the car and saw Brenda with blood all
over her body. She was dead and her throat was slit. Her stomach was cut open.
He was screaming for help, crying and scared. He turned around and around again
and again. He heard a noise behind him and looked back. He got killed with a
knife in his heart.
Blood and gore - nice! However, was it on purpose to keep it unknown that Brenda was pregnant until the very end? It might have built some suspence.....Anyway, it made one read the story once more, to make sure one had not missed any information :-)
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