I started my holiday when my parents, my brother and my sister went to Thailand, I wanted to go with them, but unfortunately, it was planned at the time I was having exams, so I lived with my friends family in a month.
They month I was living with my friends family was a relaxing month, every day after school we where chilling with each other by playing computer, watching movies and series, and in the weekends we were with some of our other weekends, and most of the time drinking some beer or again, playing computer with each other.
When my parents came home, it was back to the same old traditional summer, but this time, one of my best friend where moving into an apartment in Aalborg, so she asked me, and some of our common friends, if we could help her move her stuff. Of course we were happy to help.
And after she moved into the apartment she were holding a Housewarming, for some of her closest friends, and that went fine, except of only half of those who said that they would be there came.
Not much else have happened for me in my holiday
Ok language.
ReplyDeleteHowever, you may focus on the following in your upcoming essay:
Spelling: where - were,
The genitive: friends - friend's,
Use of words: weekends - friends?, except of - except from.
Concord: she were holding - she was holding/she held, have happened - has happened.
Too bad about the Thailand trip, but it sounds as if you had a nice holiday despite not going with your family :-)