In my summer holiday, I have been doing completely nothing interesting at all. But i have been hanging out with my friends, working, and i have been at a couple of birthday parties, but nothing Extraordinaire.
Now that I think of it, I actually did do one interesting thing. I went to Green concert with my parents; I had a special V.I.P ticket because. My dad works at the military; he is the barrack master (kaserne mester). He is the person who is in charge, of all the areas around the Aalborg barracks.
The V.I.P ticket will grant you access, to a restricted area in the concert area. Only the very important persons are allowed to enter that area. People like celebrities, such as Jakob Haugaard, Nik and Jay and many others. I was lucky enough to meet up with Jakob Haugaard; I got my picture together with him. After I got my picture, I and Jakob Haugaard were standing in the cold and beautiful rain, chatting about how nice Aalborg is and how much he enjoys coming here every year. That was the thing I enjoyed the most in my summer holiday.
The rest was pretty boring, cold weather, days with a lot of rain and inside activities.
Best regards
Daniel Benjamin Kornevald
Ok language. However, you may focus on the following in your next assignment:
ReplyDeleteSpelling: i - I,
Punctuation: you have a few full stops too many
Phrasing: I got my picture - I got my picture taken.
Otherwise ok. Sounds like a nice concert :-)