Friday, January 20, 2012

The killer in the darkness


Charlie and Brenda were on their way home from Charlie’s parent. It was a late night about half past eleven.  They were driving through the wood, the only way home from the parents. Suddenly the car brakes down and there was smoke on front of them. They looked at each other and decided that Charlie should walk for help, while Brenda use there phone to call for help.

The cars headlights were lighting up the road, so Charlie was following the lights tribes on the road. Brenda took the mobile phone and dialled the number to the police. She listened but couldn’t hear anything. There was no signal. She was afraid and looked scared around. She heard a weird noise and suddenly everything was black.

Charlie walked and walked, but he doesn’t feel that he came anywhere. He heard a rustling noise and turned around. His adrenaline was pumping through his body. He got a feeling that something was wrong and decided to head back to the car. When he came back to the car he saw blood everywhere. A newborn baby lies dead on the car. He was choked. He looked into the car and saw Brenda with blood all over her body. She was dead and her throat was slit. Her stomach was cut open. He was screaming for help, crying and scared. He turned around and around again and again. He heard a noise behind him and looked back. He got killed with a knife in his heart.

THE END !!!!! Hahahahahahahahah 

1 comment:

  1. Blood and gore - nice! However, was it on purpose to keep it unknown that Brenda was pregnant until the very end? It might have built some suspence.....Anyway, it made one read the story once more, to make sure one had not missed any information :-)

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