We want to tell about one of the most fantastic places in the world, Egypt. Firstly it is important to know, what the best places to go in Egypt is. Secondly it is important to have good company on your holiday. Egypt has a lot of attractions and very nice hotels. The first thing we went to see was the big and very famous pyramids.
The second thing we noticed was the camels. People were just walking with them in the streets. Some of the people with the camels asked us if we wanted to try riding one of them. But we kindly said: No, but thanks for the offer. It was only because we were out shopping, and did not want to leave our bags and we could not bring them.
Lastly we just want to say that going to Egypt was a very good holiday, and would like to advice others to visit the beautiful country of Egypt.
Camilla Vad & Louise Milling 1.b
Nice impressions of the atmosphere in Egypt. One can almost smell the camels.
ReplyDeleteHowever, a few more discourse markers for adding information or marking a contrast would have been nice :-)
A few linguistic mistakes - did you proof-read your text before posting it?