Who is she?:
She is a girl called Bree (played by a actress Jessica Rose smith) she is a weirdo. She is 15 years old in the beginning, and she acts crazy. She can’t tell everyone about her problems, and therefore she ‘’talks’’ to the computer. She a bubbly teenage girl whose trait positive blood makes her the target of a dangerous cult called the Order.
What type of life does she lead?:
She lives a hard life. Her parents are in a cult called Sodiac of Denderra, and suddenly they disappeared. She knows that the only way she can get her parents back, are to go through the special ceremony. She lives in a boring town with boring people. She makes video blocks on the internet. Her best friend Daniel is in love with her, and she doesn’t know how to react. Her parents are in a cult, but she doesn’t want to be a part of it. She refuses to take part of the ritual, and then the cult kidnapped her parent, to make her take part of the ritual.
Who does she hang out with?:
Daniel (a.k.a. Danielbeast), Bree's best friend who only wishes to protect her, but is often distracted by romantic engagements. He can often jump to conclusions, and battles with an alcohol addiction along with his parents. Jonas Wharton (a.k.a. jonastko), a boy who meets Bree online and discovers that his family has more ties to the Order than he realizes. He can be too willing to trust others, which often leads the TAAG into unfortunate situations. Sarah Genatiempo (a.k.a. theskyisempty99), a misunderstood 19-year-old who develops a crush on Daniel and travels with TAAG. While she struggles to figure out what to do with her life, she harbors a dark and dangerous secret. Taylor Genatiempo (a.k.a. soccerstar4ever), Sarah's younger sister who has an impressive amount of computer hacking skills. A passionate soccer player, she has more social skills than the rest of her family and is often upset by their actions. Gina Hart, Bree's trait positive older sister who was taken from her at birth and used as a lab rat most of her life. She is quiet and reserved, and feels more comfortable with art supplies than with other people.
What is the storyline?
She is a teenage girl. We are hearing a lot about her. She is a shy girl, who got those normal teenage problems. But because she doesn’t want to go through the special ceremony, the parents are taking away from her. Her parents gets (adult) kidnapped, then she goes to get them back, finds her long lost sister, and everything ends with her disappearing.
What is the storyline of the selected videos?
She is a teenage girl, her parents gets (adult)kidnapped, then she goes to get them back, finds her long lost sister, and everything ends with her disappearing. She wants to go through the special ceremony, to get her parents back.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qw7xFYSor4I&NR=1&feature=fvwp
I get the feeling, that there are a bit too much C+P in this post.
ReplyDeleteBut besides that, nice language. I accentually fancies the fact, that you've chosen to characterise them all!
You could use some more formal language... You are using words like; Weirdo and crazy, to describe Bree?
ReplyDeleteyeah,I agree with them both, but I like your storyline. :-)
ReplyDeleteWell........
ReplyDeleteDid you guys even read this through after you "wrote" it?
The first bit should have been read through to correct all those minor mistakes, which frankly makes the whole thing illegibly...
But I like your idea to make a characterization of all they roles in the story, this just shows that you really watched many of the episodes. I did not know that Daniel had a drinking problem, or that Sarah Genatiempo harbored a very dark secret.